Friday, July 13, 2018

Life, Deleted Extract

Hey guys! Sorry I haven't been on here for a while. I'm back and I've decided to showcase my novel called 'Life, Deleted' that I've been working on. It's at 25K words and its a childrens fantasy novel and I'm having fun writing it. Please do not steal my writing. I've been umming and arhhing about putting this on here because of people potentially stealing it but that's why I've decided to just go with one chapter. I hope you enjoy:

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CHAPTER ONE:

Three children were making their way across a busy, packed Leeds high street. They walked huddled together; other people bustling them from side to side. It was a major holiday in England and one of them, Starr, had thought it would be a clever idea to go out shopping on that day and drag her two friends along with her. As she inched along the street Starr solely regretted her idea now. Both Reuben and Melanie were giving her glares at either side of her and it wasn’t like she could hide from them; there was literally no way through all of the people that were around them. She gave a little glance towards Reuben and could see that he had a little cheeky smile protruding from his mouth which meant he wasn’t all that angry at her. Starr felt a little relief in that knowledge.
         Reuben had been the main one to back up Starr’s idea. Even though he knew there would be plenty of people around he didn’t really mind that. He wanted to get out of his house that he had been cooped up in for a few days. Needless to say he was growing bored stiff. Another minute in the living room with his parents and he would actually consider running away to live with his friends. He always liked to have a sense of adventure and having to wade through a lot of people on a Saturday afternoon was a lot more fun than he had been having all week as sad as that sounded. Reuben looks over at his other friend Melanie with his eyebrow quirked upwards in a questioning manner.
         It wasn’t as if Mel was angry at her or anything; she was just annoyed. Going around Leeds when it was this busy wasn’t her idea of fun. She sees Reuben looking at her with a questioning look and she knows that he doesn’t want her to be too harsh on Starr. It’s hard though; just because Starr’s got some condition that will make her make rash decisions and get them into situations such as this one it doesn’t mean that it can be easy for Mel to just not get annoyed with her when things don’t go according to plan. Mel ignores Reuben’s glance and instead looks around for a gap of some kind so that they are able to figure out exactly where they are. Mel spots an opening when two people part and there is a direct route to a sign post. Mel turns back and prods Starr to get her attention.
         Starr feels something on her stomach area but just thinks it’s somebody in the crowd and ignores the feeling. It’s not until she feels the same sensation again that she turns her head to where the feeling is coming from and she sees Mel pointing somewhere. When Starr follows to where she’s pointing she sees a signpost and nods and gets Reuben’s attention. When all three of them are aware of their destination they wait until an opening has been made again since the last one has closed because of the time it took for them all to become aware of the signpost. After a couple of minutes of waiting they all see an opening being made inbetween the crowd of people. Without thinking too much all three of them race forward to it.
         The three of them get to the opening but then something happens that makes them split up from one another. When they are just about to get out of the crowd a swarm of people intersect them and they have to think quickly on their feet. Starr pulls back from the group and runs to the right where she can see a gap. Just as Starr is making this manoeuvre Reuben is experiencing the same situation but has chosen gap on the left of the group. It’s only Mel that keeps to the original plan. Both Starr and Reuben think that if they just keep heading straight than they will all find each other.
         However, when all three of them keep on running and have not seen any of their group they become rather anxious and stop. All three of them are in dingy, dark alleyways and are confused at how they got from here after being in a crowded city centre. Obviously they weren’t thinking when they were navigating themselves and this was the consequence of that.
         They all look around their alleyways to try and gain some sense of where they are. Both Reuben and Mel deem themselves to know Leeds pretty well since they’ve lived there their whole lives. Starr, however, is a little uncertain of the whereabouts of where everything is in Leeds. Even though she has also been to Leeds quite a lot during the time that she’s been friends with Rueben and Mel she hasn’t lived here and she can be terrible with directions. She’s only ever confident when she knows a place back to front after spending years there. When she doesn’t know somewhere she can start to have anxiety attacks. As she looks around the alley and has no recognition of it in her memory she feels the steady feeling of dread that was spreading through her body. All she needed to do was try and stay calm but that was easier said than done when you didn’t know where you were or where your best friends had gone.
         For a while all three of them where looking around the alleys and they also looked behind them thinking that they would recognise the street that they had come off from. No luck; all three of the streets looked unrecognisable to all three of them. Even Reuben and Mel couldn’t make them out; the streets seemed to be like the alley that they were currently in. Like they were extended alleys or something.
         Just when all three of them thought they couldn’t get even more confused they noticed that there seemed to be a sort of shimmering barrier that was a little further ahead of them. It seemed to be like a water consistency and blue colour that came off it when the light hit it at certain angles. There were different reactions off all three of them to this barrier.
         Reuben was the first to step forward to examine it. Although he had a sense of adventure this trait did make him reckless on occasions. He had the urge to go up and touch it but there was something holding him back. He seemed to be having Mel’s voice in his head telling him:
         ‘Don’t be so stupid Reuben. You don’t know what that thing could do to you. You should turn back now. Find Starr and I.’
         In an act of rebellion towards Mel and her rules Reuben decides to go head first into the barrier void.
         Mel does not react how Reuben has imagined her to react to this barrier, however. She is cautious of it and she wants to be as far away from it as possible. The only thing that is keeping her from running the other direction is the notion that this barrier may lead her to her friends and let them be reunited. She knows there is a very slim chance of this happening to them but this is an act of desperation that she’s never had to decide on before. Deciding on something that would make Reuben shocked at her actions Mel backs up and starts running and takes a leap once there is enough distance for her to safely land wherever this barrier would lead her.
         Starr takes a little more encouraging to take the jump into the barrier. Her anxiety is increasing by the second and she can’t seem to calm herself down. While she is currently trying to do so she doesn’t hear the footsteps that are coming up beside her until they are a couple of paces away. Starr pays attention to them when she finally hears them and turns quickly to see who it is. Who she finds is someone she wishes is not near her. A man is leering at her with what looks like a beer can in his right hand.
         ‘Hello little girl.’ Is all Starr hears and needs to hear for her to suddenly launch into a sprint and tear down the alley and straight into the path of the barrier.
         When she reaches the barrier the man that hasn’t moved from the spot that he had been in looks at it in astonishment. He was sure there had been a girl there a minute ago. Now, however, nothing remained. There was no sign of a girl anywhere. The man shakes his head to try and remove the bizarre memory from his mind and mutters ‘I need to stop drinking so much.’ He takes a swig from his beer can and throws it to the floor and makes his way back to the crowded city centre. 


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This is just the set up obviously but I did want an actiony scene. After this chapter I go into first person view points so I may showcase some of those chapters in the future. I'm on Chapter Seventeen if you're wondering where I am with the novel. Hope you enjoyed reading it. 

Hope you have a great writing day, 

Rachel x 


















Sunday, June 24, 2018

Two very short stories.

Hey everyone. Here's some super short short stories. Both of them add up to around 300 words each I believe and I created them for a zine I want to publish. Maybe I'll do a blog post series of what I'm learning about zines and how I am doing with creating them. I created one for a prototype and didn't do very well with it but I am wanting to try and perfect it until I feel that I can maybe sell some of them. However, that is all future plans and I will write blog posts about them when the passion for zines comes bck into my life. For now, here's an example of my stories that would go into a zine:

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She didn't know where she was. All she knew was that she was lying flat on her back and her wrists and ankles were strapped to the bed tightly. When she tried to open her eyes the whiteness and brightness of the room hurt her eyes. She tried to keep herself calm. Panicking would not help her in this situation. A loud bang echoed through the room and she heard two male voices.
'She's looking well considering.'
'Considering?'
'Considering that this drug has never been tested on humans before.'
'I thought you said it had a trial run?'
'A cover up story. We tested it on one rodent and it immediately combusted.'
'And you thought it safe to test it on this human?'
'We have no option. Time is running out for Earth. This woman is our only hope for survival.'
'You never did tell us what's happening on Earth.'

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Zara knew that there was something up with Earth. No one was telling her what was happening and now that her best friend has disappeared. There have been rumours about her best friend being taken in by the government for examinations but Zara didn't believe everything she was told. However, her parents wouldn't let her find her best friend.
'It's too dangerous.'
That made Zara want to look into her friends' missing case even more. It wasn't until a week later that Zara picked up on any clues on her friends' case. She was online when the breaking news reports started flooding in. It was stating that a group of girls, including her friend (Zara saw pictures of the victims and her friend was among them), were reported missing under mysterious circumstances via government officials. It was these articles that spurred Zara onto finding other people who had missing relatives because of the government. When she found these people her passion to find her best friend increased. Don't worry Thea, I'll find you.

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I hope you enjoyed these two short stories. I won't be posting anything next week since I'll be away on holiday and working on my novel for Camp NaNoWriMo. I may do Camp NaNoWriMo updates every week in July to let you know how I'm doing.

Have a great writing day,

Rachel. x 

Sunday, June 17, 2018

The Stillness of Time

I can feel the severe pain coursing through my joints as I sit on a cold, hard steel chair

I glance around to ignore the pain and see my Mum looking straight ahead I don't know why she's not communicating with me maybe it's because she already knows why we're here and doesn't want me to panic

too late for that now I'm on the verge of having a breakdown I should be able to control my panic attack like I did lst night

it's so hard to disguise the feeling of panic rising in my throat I don't want to make a scene in the middle of the surgery I want to just be able to get through this appointment and get out of here

as I contemplate on trying to remain calm I hear some noisy kids coming around the corner of the hallway to the waiting room great more noise

I try and ignore the loud screeches and voices and focus on my hands while I try and control the panic in my throat that is threatening to cover my whole body the sound of my name 'Miss Williams' coming from the nurse who magically appears at the corner of my vision fills me with relief as I get up quickly from the chair to escape the now chaotically loud waiting room

the office is light and airy the room is a pale blue it seemed that all hospital rooms had to be that colour or a sickly green and I can hear rushing cars outside letting me know that the morning traffic was well underway

now what can I do for you Miss Williams

the nurse looks at me expectantly and I feel myself become more nervous under her stern gaze and turn to face my Mum

my Mum doesn't respond to the question and I realise she's wanting me to answer I'm so used to not having to talk with the Doctor much

I think I may have a consultant who is doing the treatment that you need that I can refer you to him if you want me to

Ilook to my Mum again and thankfully this time she decides to help me out my head is whirring with all the dates that I have booked and my head starts to ache with all the information I don't feel relief from the situation until yes that would be great wouldn't it Lyra

yes that would be great really I definitely need this treatment and if this is the best consultant for the job then I'm sure nothing will go wrong

from the chuckling sound coming from the Doctor I can tell I've been caught out with my not listening to the conversation I just can't help it when my Mum and the Doctor are talking about things I don't understand or care about my mind just wanders

well I can't promise anything but he is one of the best consultants for this kind of treatment and I wouldn't have recommended him if I hadn't of thought so

I nod in a robotic fashion and can feel my muscles tense around my mouth as I offer him a fake smile and say

well I'm just glad something can be done about this pain it's starting to distract me from my University life and I hate it when my health is keeping me from doing anything

the Doctor nods and his head starts to become a blur with how tired my eyes feel

education is something that we take seriously here at the surgery and if we can we will make sure we can fit this treatment around your study it will be hard though because of all the government cuts so we are limited with what we can do but we'll try everything we can

I nod and my neck seems not to be working properly if I can't get out of this room I feel as if my body will seize up if I don't get out

thanks again for everything

is there anything more I can do for you today

just as a recap so I know you know all of this but I'll refer you Lyra to this consultant and you can book an appointment with him nearer the time

my joints are groaning and my mind feels as if it's groaning along with it with how slow this appointment is taking

thank you

when the door opens back into the real world the noise of the people shocks my sense slightly

well that went more smoothly than I thought it would do what do you think about it all Lyra

why can't people just leave me alone in peace for a few seconds everyone seems to want to know my take on things

I think it's great Mum I can't wait to meet this consultant he must be good if the Doctor thinks so highly of him

getting out of the building was something of a relief that building always seemed to get too stuffy and the sunshine was forgiving and warmed my body up

you know I want the utmost happiness for you don't Lyra

Lyra you do know that don't you

yes I know Mum I'm fine I just want this appointment over and done with

I know I know darling and we'll get through this but you have to get through this semester and you'll be pain free this summer

I know it's just that I want a summer you know and this operation won't allow me to have one

look I understand that you're frustrated about this situation but you've been through this before and I'm sure you'll do absolutely fine in this situation

the shake of my head makes me realise that I probably sound like a whiny bitch if I said all of this out loud and I resolve to make sure that no one hears of my self-deprecating thoughts other than myself I didn't need anyone else other than myself at exactly how weak I am I don't care if I'm putting on a face to people it's just what I do it's how I survive with this condition in this world

This short story is from an anthology called Beyond the Walls 2018 and was created by the students of York St John University and published via Valley Press. If you want to purchase a copy to support the other young authors that I share this anthology with please pick up a copy here:http://www.valleypressuk.com/book/102/beyond_the_walls__new_writing_from_york_st_john_university

Have a great creative day, 

Rachel x 

Tuesday, June 12, 2018

Hello there!

Hello there! Welcome to my new blog! I already have a blog which I will link here which is where I review books. This blog will be used to post all of my creative writing pieces which includes short stories and possibly extracts of the novel that I am working on. I will possibly create blog posts on writing updates on how I am doing with my writing and how my novel is doing. I hope you join me in my writing journey. I'll post something every week - whether it's a piece of writing or a discussion post on my writing in general. Hope you enjoy them either way.

Thanks for reading and hope you create something great!,

Rachel Colley x